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February 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
that was the best story ever
does it have/get a second chapter please say yes
keep writing
does it have/get a second chapter please say yes
keep writing
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January 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Beautiful. I love the way it got me thinking, all the questions I want answers to. How did they meet? How did they come to play these games? etc. etc. Love the way you portray Jack, also. Please, write more!
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December 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Excellent story! Do keep it going...
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November 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was one of the most intense fanfics that I have ever read. You finished off the chapter with too many questions and it will kill me if I can't read more of this beautiful fanfic that you have just begun. I'm begging you to please write more. It was amazing!
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November 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
that was incredible.
and sad.
its beautiful.
and sad.
its beautiful.
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November 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow. Just... wow. That was absolutely wonderful! I loved all the emotion in it, and the way you portrayed Jack in this. I would love to read more of this. Could you submit it to OM as well later, pretty please? ;) Great job!
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November 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very well done. Surprising and different from a lot of what I've seen. I like how you gave Jack a darker, more emotional side in this. Thank you for such a well-written piece. I can tell you thought it out.
I hope you'll add more or give us a companion piece so we can find out what happens next!
I hope you'll add more or give us a companion piece so we can find out what happens next!
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November 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow that was great...extremely powerful! I would great fi you wrote more!
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November 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow. That...was...amazing! I loved it! I love how it ended too.