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This story was wonderful and I can't wait to start on part II. Thank you for sharing and I have no doubt that part two is going to be on point as well.

Wow this is an amazing story! Well done, so exciting to read I couldn't stop once I started. You have a talent for writing.

Enjoyable, except the way Lexx spoke could e improved. When she talks oh things like hurling, it makes her sound like a teenager.

Recently caught the end of AVP and was interested in the relationship between Lex and Scar. So of course I went to look for some fan fictions and you have no idea how thrilled I am that I found this one. It was well written, emotional, and beautiful. I think all other AVP fanfics will have a hard time competing.

Oh my god, I love this story. I have never read a predator story like this before. Your plot line and characters are very original. I love how you started off Lex and Scar's relationship has hating each other and now they love each other. Ok I know they haven't admitted their love yet but its so obvious they love each other. I love Rave, it's nice for Scar to have a best friend and for Lex to have a loyal friend. I like the introduction of Jet, she would be a good love match for Rave. I can't wait to see how Lex will fair on their planet. I hope she becomes a warrior that is well respected and that she and Scar becomes mates with children! Yes they deserve it all! lol. LOVE THIS STORY. Can't wait until the sequel.

outta curiosity are ya gonna extend this story further past the movie?(I didnt care for how it turned out really)Overall keep goin!!

More please.........

I like where this is headed. Keep up the great work, and update soon.

love the story. you rock with your awsome concepts. keep it up.

This chapter was awesome as usual. I can't wait to read the next chapter, keep up the good work and please update soon.