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January 15, 2024 at 12:00 AM
A really good start, hope to see finished someday!
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June 2, 2009 at 12:00 AM
this was a great fic. Giving readers Vaako's background and having the conflict resolved on his homeworld was a wonderful idea. The ending with Riddick meeting up with his old buddies was great too, the former Lord Marshal conquering the place that had Butcher Bay and converting the inmates a nice touch. I really enjoyed this fic !!!!!
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May 26, 2009 at 12:00 AM
This is a wonderful story, especially because Chronicles of Riddick really doesn't have much selection in terms of GOOD, IC stories. It is a pity that it isn't finished, and I'm writing in the hopes of encouraging you to continue.
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March 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I just finished reading the first chapter and I'm blown away. It was amazing.
From the way you portrayed the characters, to the ideas of the plot, the way it moved, the smooth sentences and wording, the drama...
I loved it. Right from the start to the perfect ending.
I must read more right away ^-^
From the way you portrayed the characters, to the ideas of the plot, the way it moved, the smooth sentences and wording, the drama...
I loved it. Right from the start to the perfect ending.
I must read more right away ^-^
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March 4, 2009 at 12:00 AM
Squeee!
This is exiting and thrilling and enjoyable and I can't wait for the next chapter!! *_*
This is exiting and thrilling and enjoyable and I can't wait for the next chapter!! *_*
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November 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Very good fic. I like how your taking it slow with their relationship. I also like the story. i think its very interesting, and well thought out. I would have tortured them a lil bit more in the light and dark chamber, i think that was what it was called? heh. But, anyways, it was pretty cool. Please continue, i would love to read more.
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November 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
more? Please.
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November 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I just wanted to say this is one of my fav stories!!!! Ever!!!!!!
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November 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great story. You are talented!!! Please update. Love the title, love the story.
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November 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Authors lj is falconsheart.livejournal.com. I don't think she realised that Aff.net is working again.