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August 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
It was totally adorable, not to mention hot. Loved it!
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August 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful story just one thing tho:
"Obi-Wan. As his Master trailed kissed down his neck, Anakin stared at his arm of durasteel.
Admist the pleasure from his body and the rising horror in his mind, everything was starting to get blurry as one thought ran through his mind.
His arm was metal. Where flesh and bone should have been, there wasn't.
No.
He trembled hard as Obi-Wan's hands caressed him.
Please no.
And he came"
... Ani Does have a Durasteal Arm...how would that wake him up? Just wondering kool story all the same
"Obi-Wan. As his Master trailed kissed down his neck, Anakin stared at his arm of durasteel.
Admist the pleasure from his body and the rising horror in his mind, everything was starting to get blurry as one thought ran through his mind.
His arm was metal. Where flesh and bone should have been, there wasn't.
No.
He trembled hard as Obi-Wan's hands caressed him.
Please no.
And he came"
... Ani Does have a Durasteal Arm...how would that wake him up? Just wondering kool story all the same
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August 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Scrach that its his left arm thats Durasteal My bad sorry ^__^"hehe
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January 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I wanna be thanked for reviewing too!!
I love this story, I was never really into the whole teacher student thing but, hey there's a first time for everything!
I love this story, I was never really into the whole teacher student thing but, hey there's a first time for everything!
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January 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Well, this was a fine story. Even for someone who doesn't usually read slash. Nicely written, and so very deliciously erotic.
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January 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
U. Friggin. Rock! Phew...waff all the way, an a few sniggers:P
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January 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG!!!! I so love this story. I totally love how you got them together and how you metioned his mole. It is so sexy and your sex scence was really good too. Love it!
Scarlett Raine
Scarlett Raine
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January 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
O.O! *squeals* I think the chapter fit nicely and the ending was excellent. The more I read, the more eager I was to finish. And, being able to actually envision the entire thing means you did a great job! ^.^
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December 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hello there!
Just wanted to say that I have enjoyed this so far. Really good stuff here. You have a light and breezy style that flows through consistently through the story. Keep up the good work!
Just wanted to say that I have enjoyed this so far. Really good stuff here. You have a light and breezy style that flows through consistently through the story. Keep up the good work!
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December 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh, me...oh, my! I think this is one of the best fics I've read; it's so greatly written! And the fact of it being Obi-Wan & Anakin *swoons* Wow! I can't wait to see what happens next ^.^