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December 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
The angst and unrequited (or so they think) emotions are really well done. i can't wait to read more!!
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December 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really, really love your story. I can't wiat to see what they both have to say when they realize that they are not dreaming. Next time though you should finish out the sex scene. You are really good at them. At least at what you write of them. I can;t wait to read more keep of the excelent work.
Scarlett Raine
Ps: Happy Holidays!
Scarlett Raine
Ps: Happy Holidays!
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December 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, what a great 'christmas present' LOL I love this chapter. O.K. I will admit I love ALL of them :) I do hope you update very soon (I guess you can take Christmas off LOL :) ) I like the whole 'dream' theme, like you don't know if it ends up a dream or not :) I love it, Happy Holidays and thank you :) ALD
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December 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I like this chpater as well :) What can I say, you have a way with words. I liked the 'dream' sequence of when Ani is thinking about Obi. I could actually picture your words :) I really hope you update soon. I was also thinking that at the end of that chapter you were going to have Obi standing behind him or something LOL You surprised me. Keep going, I want to read another chapter by Sunday LOL Thanks ALD
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December 13, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is definitely good! I'm going to be waiting for the updates ^-^
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December 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was a great story...I can't wait to read the rest. Very well written.
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December 12, 2005 at 12:00 AM
very good story. I am glad that you have updated often. I am looking forward to the next chapter, so hurry :) ALD
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December 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This is one interesting story. I do hope you're going to continue it?
The fic is extremely well written, and your beautiful writing style manages to capture that particular chemistry between the characters perfectly. The portrayal of each character is brilliant and very true to the originals. The ambience of the story leans heavily to the very well done build up, and the great attention paid to description and detail gives the fic wonderful depth. The plot is very exciting, with a few captivating twists and a fresh touch to the storyline.
The fic is extremely well written, and your beautiful writing style manages to capture that particular chemistry between the characters perfectly. The portrayal of each character is brilliant and very true to the originals. The ambience of the story leans heavily to the very well done build up, and the great attention paid to description and detail gives the fic wonderful depth. The plot is very exciting, with a few captivating twists and a fresh touch to the storyline.
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December 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Love it! keep going, I want to know what happens.
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December 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really like the story. It's really good. I'm impressed that your getting your chapters out so fast but also glad. Can't wait to see what happens next. Keep up the good work.