rate_review Reviews

OMG!!!!! That has got to be one of the best stories I've ever read!!!!!!!
You blew my mind! I hated having to go to sleep and getting up to go to work.... they just got in the way. I was so upset that it's over... *tear*

Keep up the great work!!!!! Hope to read more of your work!
LOVED IT!!!!

Kind of miss Sol, and Vex agreeing with that bitch was surprising...

So glad M'Pa stayed alive... woot!!! he's the second mate... woot! They better not take on a second female...

Wow, just wow! You realize I spent the last 6 hours reading every word, every Chapter of this awesome story! It was.... just WOW! Is there a second part? Again... wow! Just WOW! lmao

hi!
first off,i have to say, great story... it's pulled me in and i practially read it all in one sitting... bar getting up to grab food and feeding my daughter...^__^ very riveting! can't wait to go read the sequels!!!
tho i have to say, and please don't take this the wrong way, but, it's Bo staff, Katana, Sai and Thigh... sorry... it's just i kept reading them, and as i'm a raelly big fan of asian culture and weapons plus being a beta-reader, those four really stood out to me ><
i'm pretty sure those are the weapons you're talking about, though if i'm wrong, please srop me a msg and delete this review ^__^
Sai -> http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Sai_(weapon)
Katana -> http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Katana
Bo Staff -> http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Bo_staff
feel free to snark back! oh, if you want, i'm willing to go back and beta this for you if you don't feel like it yourself, though if i've just overstepped the bounds, feel free to be upset at me, i'll understand completely.
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I have just one word for you...WOW. That was such an INCREDIBLE story! So much development went into it, characters, plots, everything! I must say I was a bit overwhelmed when I saw how long your story was. But after I started it, I just had to finish it. And you must continue with another book, you absolutely MUST. I simply adore El, Ver'On, M'pa, and many other characters. You have a real flare for storytelling. It was an honor to read your story, and thank you for giving me and others that honor.

I hope to read more soon. ^_^

Ouch. That was a nasty punishment. Serves her right though, stupidity shouldn't be bred anyway.

I love this story. It's just indescribable. I eagerly await the next story. I wanna find out what happens on Earth. You know M'Pa's going to have his butt kicked to within an inch of his life.

loved it! awesome, awesome story! I hope more is coming!

Hurry up and get it fixed okay you can't stop now

i loved the storyand sorry about the problems with you computer, i have been writing a fanfiction of my own but havn't been able to update.

uhh, intresting chapter. A little off the story perhaps.... none the less a good story

I truly enjoy this story. Thank you very much for sharing. I liked the CSI bit. I am a fan of that as well. I also liked the pun at the end. But, I did notice that you misspelled "musk". At least that is what I think you meant?! Males in heat and all that. But, newayz, keep up the great work.