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for Rivers Run Deep

by jemstone5

person Lorna
schedule December 30, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I am sorry.I am the worst at reading my email. But it is alright with me.I Love the story.
person circle of addictions
schedule December 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow, have you ever read a story when you felt completely embarassed for the character? Well i almost wanted to stop reading!. I felt so bad for El! I can't wait to see what happens. He can't be mad at her.
person bellemorte
schedule December 24, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Another good chapter!
Ver'On better not hit El, that would make me very angry at him!
Keep the updates coming, I love that you are so fast at getting them up here!
person bellemorte
schedule December 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hey there!
Keep up the awesome story! I am absolutely loving El and Ver'On!! They are great!!
Keep the updates coming, I can't wait for them to meet up with the rest of Ver'On's clan!
schedule December 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I really like your story, and as others have said, I love the interaction with other species, too. Keep up the great work! =)
person circle of addictions
schedule December 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Talk about a cliff hanger! Please update soon!!!!
Oh they have to accept her after that speach!
person bellemorte
schedule December 23, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Yeah!! Another awesome chapter!
I loved El's speech. Can't wait to see if Ver'On gets to keep her!
Keep the updates coming!!
person Caz
schedule December 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
read it from the beginning, and am now in dire need of a new chapter... or 7. heh. you're very good at this... a few spelling mistakes, but they don't get in the way of the story, which is pretty rare. :) Keep going!
person circle of addictions
schedule December 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, that was great! I absloutly love this fic! One of my favorites. I like the longer chapters.
Please update soon, El can't be dead. I can't wait to see how thier first real conversation will go.
person Mal'fan
schedule December 22, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Great chapter! I laughed and I was awed! Thier first conversation was so sweet.
Please update soon, I love the long chapters!