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for Rivers Run Deep

by jemstone5

person Mal'fan
schedule December 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
wow! I love the interactions with the other speacies. No other story on here really does that!.
This is a really good read and I don't understand why you don't have more reviews
REVIEWS PEOPLE! lol
person Nova
schedule December 19, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Too cool! I'm lovin it! These creatures are so cool and this little nitch station, I can't wait to see more of it. This fic is so fun. Keep going, you're doing great!
person Chancelor22
schedule December 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
I very much enjoy this story! I like where this could go and might be going. I can't wait for you to continue.
person Nova
schedule December 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Hehehe, here we go, here we go. AhAHAH. Okay, too much sugar for me. You're doing great, keep it up, love love loveies soon. Hehehe
person dragon85
schedule December 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Good story more please!!
person ZenRose
schedule December 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, you update so quickly. Great chapters!. I wonder if he will take El with him....
person circle of addictions
schedule December 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
OMG, chapter 14.... tht was so sweet!!!
why did i start to fan myself, lol what a touching moment. It's like you are there watching it.
great story!!
person Mal'fan
schedule December 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Suspence Suspence!!!!!
Please update soon, You cant leave it hanging like that!!!!
person circle of addictions
schedule December 16, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, what a cliff hanger. El is crazy, lol
person circle of addictions
schedule December 15, 2005 at 12:00 AM
When someone can write such a short chapter and yet draw the reader in and feel the pain of the character.... thats a good writer!
I've only read the first chapter so far and now I have to go get some coffee so I can read the rest. I can already tell this is going to be an exciting story! :)