rate_review Reviews

Oooh, I like this. The psychological elements are so intriguing. You did a very good job with developing the plot. It is always refreshing to see a story on here that isn't just empty smut but also explores other adult themes as well. Good job! ^_^

i loved your story! it was interesting to see how they each individually perceived the same situation. this would be awesome if it was followed up by a sequel. what is going to happen next??? :)

wow... that was really hot...

this is totally great. i love how you put everything together.
def write more.

My favorite Wayne/Crane ever! Not only deliciously hot, but also lyrical, evocative and right on for these two characters. The best.

When's the sequel coming?!?

Wow... To say it simply; this story is absolutely amazing. This is obviously a character piece and an awesome one at that. The dark and twisted minds are such compelling reading as you study their seductive depths with a macabre and poetic touch. Your beautiful writing style is very captivating, creating a rather desperate ambience to the story, suiting the fic perfectly as nobody is expecting hearts and flowers for these two... At times the wording did wander into the realms of purple prose but it didn't manage to hinder the flow of the story.
I admit I'm left with a curiosity as to will there be continuation for this? As such it makes a wonderful stand alone, but more would be most welcome if it manages to keep up the exquisite class of these two chapters.