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December 28, 2005 at 12:00 AM
That was truly beautifully written, just gorgeous. There's a very good flow to it, and the voice is very clear and fitting. I think Hephaistion wouldn't have let himself be so jealous of Bagoas (I always thought Bagoas to be more the jealous type), but you handled the situation well. Well done!
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December 20, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Another Alexander fic!
How sweet to have Hephaistion jealous of Bagoas! All of my Alexander fics are from Bagoas' POV, so reading one where Hephaistion suffers is a delight.
(I sound awful, don't I? I really do recognize that Hephaistion was always number 1 with Alexander, but Bagoas has always been first with me.)
I've always used Cassander as my villian. But must admit he was gorgeous in the movie. Hope this night actually happened!
How sweet to have Hephaistion jealous of Bagoas! All of my Alexander fics are from Bagoas' POV, so reading one where Hephaistion suffers is a delight.
(I sound awful, don't I? I really do recognize that Hephaistion was always number 1 with Alexander, but Bagoas has always been first with me.)
I've always used Cassander as my villian. But must admit he was gorgeous in the movie. Hope this night actually happened!