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for Katie Trouble aka Under His Skin

by chielohana

person Rayvenz
schedule July 1, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Love love love this story I really do...its a bit scary though that the fact her best friends name is Amanda Lynn and thats my real name...why couldn't I end up with Crane *sighs*;
schedule June 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Wow, good details. And a sweet crushing relationship? This story is an excellent read. I usually despise OC's, but a B/G relationship with my idol deserves for me to give this a chance. And I'm glad I did!
schedule June 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Very funny,I read the first 2 chapters,it's so funny about the guy who cusses after the three pointer,and when Crane says "TV Games",lmao.
schedule May 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
really cool story, me likey
schedule January 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This story is great! Very interesting and realistic! Please update soon!
person Does it really matter?
schedule November 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoyed your story, and I would love to see the new chapter if your making one. I rather like your style of Crane, I mean, the notorious Scarecrow from the movies and comics are like that, and I think you captured him just right. And perhaps even more so.
-One proffesional to another, Anonymous
person Vixey
schedule February 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
please update, i cant wait to see what happens next
person Jenna
schedule January 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You really need to update this story... I also read it on FF.net and I really like this fic, please update soon!
person Katie lover
schedule January 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I never like O/Cs but I think I'm in love with your Katie. I have to admit I've read the Crane/Katie sex scene on a couple occasions *blushes* and I have my fingers crossed that there will be another one soon. That finger licking thing in ch. 8 was also sexy, btw. It's even popped in my head a few times. No pressure but please update as soon as humanly possible and give me a couple more things to add to my fantasies ;)
person Barbie Guurrll
schedule January 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love this Fic soooo much! If you don't update soon, I'll die. I've never reviewed an Adult fanfic before, but you inspired me! I love the characterization, and am dying to know how things are going to turn out! Don't kill me...If you do, I'll have to continue it myself, and that won't be pretty!! So update ASAP!!

Love,

Barbie (Crane's #2 slut, after you of course. Im second on his nightly rounds.)