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April 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really like this story alot. Can you please write some more chapters?
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August 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
a merc how wants jack not riddick oh that would be good
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February 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
TOOMBS TOOMBS TOOMBS!! KIDNAPPING JACK I LIKE THAT!
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January 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oooooooo! I like this. Please update soon! (u know u want to!) Ohhhhhh! i think i'd vote for...........a kid coming to sell something.
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January 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Toombes!
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January 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great story so far!! I vote for a kid selling something!
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January 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great update!! I think my vote is going to go with....ummmmmm......2) Toombes
I really like this story, and yes your chapters are short, but they are good chapters, and i can't wait to read more!!! update real soon!!
I really like this story, and yes your chapters are short, but they are good chapters, and i can't wait to read more!!! update real soon!!
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January 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
"'Damn kid! How did I screw up so bad? I can't fuckin' keep this shit
up!'"
hmmmm what did he screw up and what can't he keep what up? lol great update.....I am really into this story, so please please please update soon!!!
up!'"
hmmmm what did he screw up and what can't he keep what up? lol great update.....I am really into this story, so please please please update soon!!!
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January 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hmmm i wonder if he is really going out to get him some sex or to get her a present??? great update! I can't wait for more!
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December 31, 2005 at 12:00 AM
yay! more please?