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for Come as you are

by darkangel985

person Stoeffl
schedule July 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Congrats to one year AFF. It was quite an exciting one as well, with all the moving and read-only and so on, hm?

The new chapter is really great. I think that it is really mean of Hannibal when he only lightly brushes his lips against Wil's when the younger one finally surrenders. it must feel like for Will as if Hannibal had not been interested after all, as if it was all a game.

*hugs you* Thanks so much!

Und weil ich weiss, dass du Deutsch kannst...bitte mach weiter und schreib noch viele Kapitel zu der Geschichte.

Alles Liebe,

Simarillion
person Sophia
schedule July 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is a really grand story and very intense. I like how this chapter ending with Will waking up from the dream, lol. I wonder how disturbed he's going to think he is now? I really can't wait to see what happens next. Keep up the wonderful work.~Sophia
person Stoeffl
schedule June 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*falls from her chair* gah ... um ... well .... *is speechless*

This was just amazing. I somehow missed the first update, I don't know why or how. But this time I just read both of the new chapters. The story is really great. I love the way Hannibal is getting to Will and how our favourite Investigator just can't help but need what he fears so much. This is really great stuff!

I also want to thank you for your nice reviews on my two stories. *huggles you* I greatly appreciate your taking the time to leave me a comment on my writing.

Take care,

Simarillion

person The Adrians
schedule June 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
'Come as you are' was the first Han/Will fic series we'd ever read. Since then we've read a bunch more, but this series has honestly been one of the best. We've looked forward to all of your updates since we started reading back in January. Now that AFF has finished its server change, we hope you will continue to update this story. Fics like this have inspired us to write Han/Will fics ourselves. We hope to have one ready to submit here at AFF.net soon.

Keep up the good work!

-The Adrians
person Simarillion
schedule January 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter for this story. :) I really like the interaction between the two of them. I am curious what Will's reaction will be once the good doctor reveals his intentions to him.

Please continue!
person Stoeffl
schedule January 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I like the new installation of the story! Really nice. I shudder to think what it must be like to wake up like Will did. It's really scary.

I will update the Red Dragon story. Most likely two new chapters will be added either this or next week. Keep your fingers crossed. ;)

Cheers, Simarillion
person Obsidian_Butterfly
schedule January 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
A wonderful and beautifully written beginning. I simply adore it and I love how jealous Clarice is. It’s just a shame she can’t see what a great couple Will and Hannibal make *light chuckle*. Anyways, You MUST continue and soon~!
person Stoeffl
schedule January 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
No review yet?! That must be changes at once. This is looking like the beginning of a great story and I have to say that I am really curious about what the good doctor has in store for will. How will Clarice react to everything? Is she going to be a pro- or contra-Will character in this story. So far the two profilers seem to not really be too fond of each other.

Keep up the great work!

Simarillion