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by prophecygirl

person ginasue
schedule March 4, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Please, finish this story it's the best that I've read. I like how it follows EP4 can't wait to see where you go from here...
schedule February 7, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Please, Please, Please! I beg you from the bottom of my heart. Don't stop writing this story! Your gonna torture me with not continuing this story. Anyhow I just want to say I really enjoy it! Thanks for writing it and posting it here. I do hope and pray you continue ??? Please???
person Anon
schedule July 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Interesting story.
person Hollene
schedule February 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ok... Thats it... You are absolutly the BEST Fan Fiction writer I've ever read stories from. I'm serious... I'm so inspired that I started my own Darth Vader fic... It's probably gonna be alot like one of yours but I was hoping you might be like a mentor (Or my master in all things Sith Fanfiction) But if you're interested E-mail me

noangel539@hotmail.com

~Hollene~
person Busanda
schedule February 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I was glad to see that there is still more to come (I saw your post above,) but now the server is all bollixed up. I will just have to remain patient. This is such a great story -- I can hardly wait.
person JediGirl
schedule January 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Pleae tell me it's a WIP and there's more!!!!!!!!
person Prophecy Girl
schedule January 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yes, it's a WIP. There is/will be more.
person The Malice
schedule January 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Strangly the best piece of work i have yet to read... Wow....

Vader seems slightly EXTREAMLY out of character some times, but no love for 20 years could do that, and I loved how you fit the story in almost perfectly with the movies...

Masterpiece.
person Sunny
schedule January 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Well, what can I say!? I think I keep you^_^ I generally hate het, don't ask me why...nor ask me how I came to reading your story, but something about it lured me in and now I am hooked! I love how you bring canon and fanon together...the only think I am rather sad about is that Motti is dead, or isn't he!? If I were Preitha I would want to hurt him quite badly after finally getting to know the truth. I mean you will have her find out, won't you!? She is a really well developed character, I really like her^_^And I so love your Vader, not that hadn't been in love with him to begin with, ever since watching Star Wars at the age of four! I can't wait for the next chapter.
person Busanda
schedule January 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Beautifully done. I appreciate your attention to detail, it makes the story come alive.

Vader. What a romantic! I loved the room full of flowers. There is a subtlety to the eroticism that is very pleasing -- it's nice to read a story with Vader as a gentle and thoughtful lover. As cruel and harsh as he generally tends to be viewed, I've always thought that he'd be much different in the bedroom. I like this very much.