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Okay, that was an evil place to end that... ggrrrrrr

But great update nevertheless! Can't wait for the next!

Was wondering when this was going to come up!
Let's see where it goes, shall we.

Finally, Preitha and Vader have been reunited! I enjoy the interaction between the two of them -- Preitha tends out to bring out the very human side of Vader, and I find that charming.

His reaction to Preitha's information about Luke was understandable, although disconcerting for her. However, she's going to have to learn that living with a Sith can be a tad bit unpredictable at times. Fortunately, though, even as he was looking for something or someone to lash his anger at, he was able to control himself and not actually take it out on her. Did I just say that Vader exhibited self-control? It must be love.

I will wait patiently for the next chapter.

Hmmm.

Very Interesting. Strong, driving force (nod pun intended) behind the story, well developed characters, and lines quoted from the movie and described in such a way I could see it playing as I read.

Very good, definately looking forward to the rest of it.

That was nice of Luke...

But I wonder if it just made things worse. I don't trust Palps when he's this nice...

Another great chapter.

So, Luke is attracted to Preitha -- like father, like son. She has quite the affect on the Skywalker boys.

In Preitha, I think you've created a character to be admired. She is intelligent and so far has demonstrated a lot of character in the face of some very daunting situations.

This story is fantastic. I love how you have Vader here.The situation with the emperor is also intriguing. I believe that he will be causing some issues for them shortly! Again, great job and I look forward to the next update!

Oh please don't make her turn into a rebel. It will kill the whole story for me.

Leave it to Han to lighten the atmosphere. The dialogue in this chapter was very well done, and you had me laughing in spots. This is developing into a really great story. I'll look forward to another chapter soon.

Thank you to everyone, Busanda and JayCee and anyone I may have forgotten, for the continued support. I'm so pleased that people are enjoying this story.

I had a lot of fun writing this section (ch. 8). I've never been a big fan of Luke or Leia, but I have to admit that writing them is a blast. The dialogue just kind of... flows.

Thanks again everybody. :)