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by gokhuan91

person Aresy
schedule June 27, 2007 at 12:00 AM
LOL, continue, too good.
person Vanessa
schedule January 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This should be hot. It should be one of the hottest damn 'fics I've read. Unfortunately however it's just bad. The spelling's crap, the grammar's off and the whole thing is ludicrous. You should get a beta who can check those mistakes for you and possibly help out.