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September 9, 2010 at 12:00 AM
This was an entirely satisfying read. It's so charming, adventurous, hot--ladies and gents alike. And everyone is in character as well as realistic; there's just enough about them and never too much, and I didn't get bored not even once or breeze a paragraph. I can imagine meeting these people with their pros and cons. Also, your Rome is just spectacular. His dialogue defines his voice in my head, and I like how you describe his eyes, giving him that exotic touch on top of his persevere and prevail attitude. About Brian, normally it annoys me when one character is the center of attention, but it's written well here and adds some humorous and fun conflict between our folks, while not making him a Mary-Sue. Or 'Jerry' or whatever they call it, you get the lingo. Thanks for putting so much work into it and sharing it; I really enjoyed this.
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October 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
how good and interesting was that story!! keep up the good work.
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August 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OMG!! that was fuckin' good!!
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August 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh man!!
Thank you so much for writing such wonderful FATF fanfics! You're now another one of my fave writers for this fandom.
Hey, have you thought of starting an account on livejournal? You can do it for free on www.livejournal.com. I'd definately be interested and would check it out, checking out your fics would only be the start of it all!! ^__^
Keep up the great work!! You'll go far.
Thank you so much for writing such wonderful FATF fanfics! You're now another one of my fave writers for this fandom.
Hey, have you thought of starting an account on livejournal? You can do it for free on www.livejournal.com. I'd definately be interested and would check it out, checking out your fics would only be the start of it all!! ^__^
Keep up the great work!! You'll go far.
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January 7, 2006 at 12:00 AM
An awesome continuation of the story. You are weaving quite the tangled web here I am definetly curious how things are going to wind up in the end.