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Fuuuck, this was gorgeous! So hot! Loved the plot twist and I'm a little envious about that drink, where can I have an alcoholic orgasm like that??

This story is love! love the ending sentence. I always knew they had something going on between them....Great little story.

ROTFLMAO! Oh, that was great! I loved the way you did this challenge. The pick-up lines were hilariously good and well placed. I loved the idea of the drink as well. Thanks for a good read.

Hotness!

Ack! I thought I reviewed this before...oh well. This whole thing made me laugh...the pick-up phrases are hilarious...some definitely worth keeping track of. The way you weaved them into the story was also lovely...though I just had a terrible time imagining Ani and Qui-gon actually saying that stuff...but hey, this is fanfiction right? It was funny anyway.

I still don't get where that whipped cream came from...I suppose it was just to get it in there....but with it all in good humor, the strangeness is forgive. You made me laugh; I'm happy. Good job. ^_^

-Moonstar

Wow! Nicely done! I think you answered that challenge quite well! *dreamy smile* Damn how I wish I could've been a fly on that wall! Or whatever creatures are normal in that place! That was hot! And I loved how Obi-Wan was really only there to see the band. *laughs* That is so like him! Never mind that it was the hottest gay bar in the area...if his friend wanted him to be there, by golly Obi-Wan was going to be there. *snicker* He just got a tad bit more than he bargined for. Lovely!

Great job!

Hehehe...I gotta find a bar here that will make me a "Nummy Ride". Very hawt, wonderful story!