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Wow...I read this whole story in one sitting. Absolutely perfect. You did really great with sticking to the characters personality...Otis was so fucking twisted and so fucking hott! And the way you described Baby...She is terrifying. Momma is fucked 3 ways to Sunday but Tiny? Such as sweetheart. I liked the way Rufus was not a man if many words and Grandpa with his jokes...What an awesome family reunion!!! Oh! I liked how it went along with the timeline in the movie too...As you would describe a victim from the movie I could picture Otis's Whore placed right in the movie lurking just out of frame of the camera...Or some where in the shadows in a completely different part of the house. Bravo to you...I loved it❤️

I see what you meant now...hn oh well on to the next chap

I'm starting to like this its got quality

Tak!
Jeg var meget glad for at læse din fanfiction.
Jeg ved du sikkert ikke forstår mig, da min engelske er ikke særlig god, men jeg troede, jeg ville skrive en anmeldelse alligevel bare for at fortælle dig, at jeg værdsætter din fanfiction.

holde op alt det gode skriftligt.

G.D

I really, really enjoyed reading this story. It's one of the best hotc fanfics I've found on the internet so far. Do you have any more where that came from? If you ever need a beta, I would be honored to help you :)
Keep up the good work!
greets,
kali

Hello,

I believe you mentioned something along the lines of not needing a long review, but I can't guarantee the length. ^.^ I found this story, and read it in one go. That movie and the sequel, was the only horror movie to truly scare the shit out of me. I watched it at a friend's house, and when I left to go home, I actually looked around in the shadows to make sure Otis or Baby wasn't going to pop out at me. I think it's because it was about people, real people, not some pyscho in a mask that had been burned or tortured in some way, and those people were sick and twisted and cruel. You managed to carry on that tradition here. I really felt for Karen, I could understand everything that she was going through. I felt her reactions were all justified to her treatment. I am amazed that she was able to push herself to keep surviving, to find the will to live. I can't blame her either for enjoying sex with Otis. Who wouldn't prefer a scrap of affection and an orgasm to being raped? I can't honestly say though, I would have read the story to completion had the beginning not showed that she lived through her torture. Nearly a year is a damn long time. I also can't say that this story left me with a warm and fuzzy feeling, but it was good. Very well written, and I don't know if the "raw" chapters were ever beta'd, but I didn't notice anything amiss. And I am a spelling and grammar nazi. ^.^ I'm not sure if you will ever check this story to see if you have anymore reviews, and I never even looked to see when this was published...I am assuming it was sometime after "Devil's Rejects" came out. I have to admit though, at the end of that movie, depsite everything those characters put people through, I would be lying if I didn't say I was a little sad to see them die. And yes, while I can watch the movie and think that Otis is....(and I cringe as I type this) sexy and dangerous....it is a *lot* different when he is unleashing the fury of hell on you. I laughed at some parts, and I wish that Karen *did* tell Danny that Otis was a better fuck than him. That would have been awesome!! LOL. Thank you for writing this story and sharing it with us. It feels a bit weird saying that about a 15 chapter story whose sole contents are rape and murder....but I will say it anyways. ^.^

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I've got to add a post script (as if my review wans't verbose enough...) when I was reading the last of chapter 15, I was expecting to discover that Karen decided to start murdering people, in Otis' honor or something. But her throwing flowers on the spot where he died was just as fitting. ^.^

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Well you're a good writer but i couldnt read it all, not my cup of tea. Good luck on your next stories though. ^^ *nod nod*

Brilliant. Just fucking brilliant. I've read too many stories based on Otis in which he either reforms to the good side or the chick-character goes bad, and this was a breath of fresh air just when I really needed one. You expanded the characters in a way that remained very true to how they were percieved on screen, and... well, just BRILLIANT. Bravo, good job, I hope you're writing for a goddamned living because you need to be making money off this.

Wow. I've really quite enjoyed this. It is very rare to find a fic where violence is neither glorified nor prettied up. I do like that it was hinted that she was losing her mind without going overboard.

Great fic!