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Once again, great stuff. Love the nasty descriptions. I'm looking forward to read more. And please, if you write more Rejects fictions, by all means post them here!!!

Oo, that last chapter is creepy! What's going to happen to her now? Have your beta readers gotten back to you? Please don't abandon this story, there is a big lack of decent House fanfictions in this world. Sorry you're not getting more reviews, you deserve them.

I think your work is fantastic. It is very well written and well composed. Please post your other fanfics if you feel comfortable...I think we're all waiting for any and all Firefly goodies.

You have made your protagonist quite believable and I am impressed. Great details and descriptions...I know what you mean about people not reviewing. I gave it a name in my tales....R&R, reading and running. LOL, I told people to stop doing that. I hate getting all these hits and then no one wants to review. Kinda sucks. Anyway, I like how you went into more depth on the little "zoo" and the graphic nature of the family and deeds they perform. I enjoyed these movies when they came out, simply to see that insane family get what they deserved. Though, I thought it odd that the second movie never touched on the tunnels or the freaky mutated people in the first. It was kind of left hanging. I am glad you have a beta...I frankly have to edit my own shit, and that is a pain in the ass. Great story though!

sick and nasty and utterly delightful- please please post some more!

Wow. I'm only halfway the 1st chapter, and I couldn't contain myself to review it right away. I like what I see! I like what I see! It's very well written, great grammar and such. Everything is perfectly believable - what the cops are doing and saying, what the girl is thinking and feeling. I like how she takes accurate conclusions about people through small details - the sheriff's tone of voice, the cop's lines of expression. I can tell you have really put yourself in that situation, not just merely writing what popped into your head. That's how I write, too; if I can't "transport" myself into a story, if I can't see and smell my surroundings, almost like remembering them... it doesn't work. I'm gonna keep reading now; I surely hope you continue writing!

You can't just leave it like this. She is going to meet the rest of the family, right? And what's carved in her leg?