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April 10, 2008 at 12:00 AM
i love this story i hope you will some day get a new chapter up
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May 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
oh,God! the part when they tell Padme Leia died...my heart broke!
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May 24, 2007 at 12:00 AM
great story! please update!
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February 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
The idea is interesting, but your format makes the story very difficult to read. There is almost no punctuation, no paragraphs, and no description. All of the quotes just kind of run together. If you are trying for a surreal or poetic style, it doesn't work (in my opinion). And the quotes are too random and unconnected, with no scenes or settings, to make a good straightforward story.
I'm not flaming you, just being honest. The plot sounds interesting, but there is no story to tie all these quotes together.
I'm not flaming you, just being honest. The plot sounds interesting, but there is no story to tie all these quotes together.
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January 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Frankly, I'm surprised that you've received good reviews for this story. Nothing is described in very much detail. This story is pretty much all dialogue. Also, the way it is written is a little confusing. As for the plot? It's been done.
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January 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
not bad... write more
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January 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is an truly intriguing FF. Glad I stumbled upon it. Can't wait to see what happens next.
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January 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
FOR SITH'S SAKE. COULD YOU PLEASE CHANGE YOUR SUMMARY FROM ALL CAPS SO YOU AREN'T SHOUTING AT EVERYONE?!?!?!?!?!