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schedule January 3, 2012 at 12:00 AM
I'd really like to know how this ends....please update!
schedule October 21, 2009 at 12:00 AM
aww I want another chappie please? its a great story, and very cute
schedule June 30, 2008 at 12:00 AM
love it. Email me when you update please: narcoleptic86@gmail.com
person Viktoria
schedule September 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
absolutely STUNNING story- you should write more! Love Jacks insecurity- very in character!
person Neo
schedule August 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Please update.
person Stephanie
schedule July 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is my favorite story and you haven't updating for months. Please update soon.
person Neogirl52
schedule March 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Love the pairing and MPreg setup. Please update soon. :)
person Mila_Crazyx
schedule February 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hii! Here I'm again. Just read your fanfic of OC, and now this one! I loved Four Brothers, and cried like crazy when Jack died. I'm really enjoying this so far! The idea of Mpreg doesn't bother me at all! it's the perfect solution for them ^^x
Just one thing that I found, in chap. 3,
"He lade his head on Bobby's chest" Shouldn't be laid?
Well, I'm gonna keep track on this, please update!
Byee =)
person jay
schedule January 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
good keep it coming i want more and ur so good 2 !!!
person Neogirl52
schedule January 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really like your story. Jake is my favorite person from 4 Brothers and Jake/Bobby is my favorite pairing.