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July 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love it! Very nice, can't wait to see more. I love Cass and Patrick, the history you hinted at promises he's a complex antagonist.
Once in a while it was difficult to tell which of the men you were talking about, but other than that no complaints.
Once in a while it was difficult to tell which of the men you were talking about, but other than that no complaints.
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July 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
this is actually promising.. very good. I hope you update. :)
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January 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow!! I loved your first chapter!! Your story will be awesome I know it!! You have a couple of spelling and grammer mistakes but they aren't that notice able. I think Patrick is an asshole!! I hope you write a flash back of what happend to Cass in grades school so we know why she hates him soo much!! I hope to read lots more soon!! ^__~
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January 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow, I really liked that. Good job on the story so far. I can't wait to read more. Though Cassandra seems to have some issues... it seems like she's almost too timid to be comfortable around ANYONE let alone just him. But maybe it's JUST him who brings it out? Either way, I can't wait to see what happens. And I hope Patrick dies. Oops, did I say that?