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for Baby, It's Cold Outside

by Stranj100

schedule January 13, 2008 at 12:00 AM
Awww - that was cute! I really liked the way you wrote Will especially. And don't you just love those embarasing photo-album pics! XD

- M
schedule January 22, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I would love to see the sequal to this when you post it. Which I hope is soon. If you have a mailing list I'd love to be added. My addy is SeverusSentinel@wmconnect.com . Keep up the lovely work.
person isaac
schedule November 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i loved every adoreable second of that
schedule July 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
To me, the way you wrote Will felt like Sora of Kingdom Hearts games. It's not a bad thing, it just made me giggle ^^ And damn those ooze monsters! The slime never seems to end!
person Brittney
schedule July 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really liked this fanfiction! I thought it was really cute!
person Leuce_Poplar
schedule July 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I just got into this fandom and that was a GREAT welcoming! Very hot and sweet at the same time! Can't wait for the sequel!!!

Leuce
person Yang of the Eastern Temple
schedule February 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
i like this. it has that innocent feeling to it. I hope that there is a sequel. I'd like to see how Warren tries to get Will comfortable enough to go that far. I commend you on this story and hope that the sequel will just as good if not better. Please send me an email reminder of your next update. That is if you do that kind of thing.

Yang
schedule January 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Well, I have to admit, though I personally don't see Will as being very...drool-worthy (something that you've no control over as it was Disney's casting so don't worry about it), this fic is written well enough that I can enjoy. Very good, you captured both characters very well. Is there going to be more--or another--coming from this? Thanks!