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for Right Hand

by ElfNight

person ACampeau
schedule January 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow! What a great story! I can't wait to see what happens next! Your Vaako is just too too too cute for words, and I bet that Riddick wants to pet him almost as much as I do. ^_^
person Chaosdreamer
schedule January 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Poor Vaako. So much stress. XD

Never seems to be gaining a break.
person Harleyd
schedule January 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
EEEEEE!

Though I read the last line and coudln't help but be like 'HA!' which made everyone in the computer lab look at me funny.

I loved your fight scenes, you're a really talented writer and you are incredible at creating the atmosphere in the story, you could really feel like.... all hell was about to break loose and how like... you kinda got the feeling of all this going on and just glancing trouble out of the corner of your eye until Vaako got attacked. Poor Vaako, he doesn't want a doggie. lol - I really! liked that, cause i like my Vaako submissive but that was marvalous, i'm like.. yay! Vaako's not low man!

And I love him explaining the 'right hand' thing, it was absolutely adorable and Riddick just *adores* flustered Vaako, doesn't he? And YAY High Consort indeed, what a blushign lil cutie Vaako is.

Can't wait for the next chapter, all i'm bouncy excited waiting for it!
schedule January 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love the latest chapter, you're really doing a brilliant job with this story.
I'm really looking forward to reading more.
person vinchildy
schedule January 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
it really getting good now. vaako as riddick consort? That going to be hot and i can't wait until they have sex because riddick so want to sleep with vaako. i can't wait til you update. your story is really really good it make me want read more every day. that why i check everyday to see if you updated.
person Bea
schedule January 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*evil snicker*
Poor Vaako - he won't get out of this one, will he?
Please keep writing as fast as possible. I'm looking forward to every update!
As mentioned before: Loooove the story!
person Bea
schedule January 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is definitely getting good!
I can hardly wait till your next update. Please keep going, this is going to be a great story!
May the plot bunnies never leave you!
person Soraya
schedule January 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is great - I'm really enjoying how the story is unfolding, especially Vaako's confusion at what Riddick is up to. Sincerely, hope you update again soon!
person Grey
schedule January 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Eee... and just when I think that this story cannot possibly hit any more of my favorite buttons, you have Riddick all but *herding* Vaako into his life, and Vaako himself just being so sweetly confused and vulnerable that it makes my face hurt from all the grinning that I'm doing. I love whatever is going on with the Hellhounds, and the fact that Riddick has now gotten Vaako divorced, dressed him up, and moved him into his quarters without Vaako having clue one, and *all* of the secondary characters. (Much continuing love for the internal politics of Necromonger society, also. Mmm. *grins*)
person Chaosdreamer
schedule January 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hmmm, what is our Riddick up to?

Love the Hellhound interaction. Definately adds an amusement factor.

Poor Vaako, he doesn't know what to do. XD