rate_review Reviews

*SQUEEE!*

Yay! Chapter 3 was fantastic, as usual. I love how your hellhounds took such a shine to Vaako. Who wouldn't want to nuzzle him?
I'm curious as to why he gets all the purifyings.. (is that even how you would say that?) And I'm gettin an idea of Riddick's plans for Vaako - (probably more than he is getting, he seems so confused)

Though I'm super glad he's still doing his commander thing (i keep wanting to just put him in bed and tell him to stay, which is really not fair to him I guess)

I'm so glad you posted the chapter early! It was the first thing I checked when I got home from classes today and I did a little dance when I saw it.
Not done with Dame yet, huh. You know shes the type that will be a thorn in your side as long as she's around.

I love how your plot is going (that you are taking the time to work out the plot and explain things - i don't get to see well written plots often and I'm delighted by yours) and I can't wait to read more!

Finally I get the chance to review. Let me tell you that I really like your take on the possible continuation of COR. I am curious as how Vaako will react on finding out what Riddick's plans on his new position are. ;)

Please continue with this great story!

You know you are so right. There aren't enough Riddick/Vaako stories out there. I'm glad you're gonna help solve this problem. Love the story, and hope you'll finish it. Can't wait for chapter 4.

Every chapter is making me more anxious. Their is a puzzle and I still haven't gotten it yet.

Keep updating

LOVE IT
Maybe a little longer chapters

It'a 1 of the best I'v read

That was actually pretty neat ending there, was the hell hound a test for Vaako and was he
that dazed... very cool

This is a great story. I really like Riddick/Vaako stories and, like you said, there aren't enough of them. I am REALLY looking forward to more chapters.

I had to laugh at the end of chapt 2 and what you did with Dame Vaako. :)

i like this story alot. i very interest in what riddick got plan for vaako. i also like how dame vaako got what coming to her what a witch. please update soon.

Oh, this is really getting good.

I'm looking forward to reading what Riddick's plans are.

What an excellent start! I can't wait to read more.