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for Dark Lineage

by antisan

person ChaosProphet
schedule June 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
good stuff! i like the dead jedi wise-ghosts aiding luke everytime he's unconscious (which is distressingly often ;) ), and the idea of luke bringing anankin back to the light dangled in front of us by a smirking qui gon means i HAVE to read the next chapter! start. right now....
person Anon
schedule February 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
please please please finish...you have a few mispellings but this story is starting to unfold. lovely details, story line, very good. i'm waiting for th porn now. please?
person pureevil230
schedule February 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
very interesting.

hope luke can help vader see the light.

can't wait for more smut.

UPDATE SOON!
person HathorSG1X
schedule February 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Must have more L/V mush....-goes into trance- very good, pleaseeeeeeeeeeeee write more!
person Shoot-Pice
schedule January 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Good story, although it could be better if Vader, Luke, and Leia had a threesome.
person Dark Jedi
schedule January 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Whoo, Qui-Gon! XD Great chapter. I love the scenes with Luke and Vader together...speaking of which, nice to know that Vader's getting an actual body!
person Queen Serenity of the Naboo
schedule January 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yay! Vader's gonna be whole again! And Luke's feeling something more than lust! Whoa, I wasn't expecting Qui-Gon to show up; I loved it. ^^ Keep it up please!
person Val
schedule January 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
love LV fics, can't wait to read more :D !!
person Vampirezdarkluver
schedule January 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
this is really good I like it and I can't wait for the next part. The only thing that I'd ask is that when you do the unconscious conversations (like the one between Luke and Qui Gon? maybe put it in Italics so that we can see that it's a different way of communicating. I like the story anyway.
person Elizabeth
schedule January 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love the Vader/Luke pairing, which is the reason I started reading this story. But chapter 3 has gone in such an unusual direction, now I'm completely hooked on it. What a unique, intriguing idea, "regrowing" Vader on Kamino! Looking forward to what will happen next.