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Remetan! I started reading this before and I just got back to it. Lordy! Nice set up you have going here, she seems just about as bull-headed as he is. I can't wait to read more, I love how it started so unexpectedly. I would freak out if I couldn't see or move, and you captured that emotion in him well; the fact that he was taken aback at the fact she had done it so easily. Great work, let me know when you update!

This is very good! More, please!

That is a great prelude to a wonderful set up!

Keep going! Please keep going! You would make at least one very happy woman if you kept going!! I really want to know what happens!!

(also, the word straight is misspelled somewhere near the end, not sure if it was a typo or not, but thought i's mention it)...GREAT START! write more and update frequently!!! ..please?!?!?

I think Riddick will give in....hes a man and hes riddick! lol
I cant wait to read more!