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by Ladykohl

schedule June 11, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I am new to this board and I have to say that your writing is wonderful! I just spend the last few days reading all three of your Star Wars stories and all a can say to complain is I wish they were completed. I guess it is a worry that you have a total of three stories posted and not one of them is completed and it looks like it's been a while since you updated and your e-mail is blocked. I hope I didn't waste the last few days reading your stories that may never be finished. Your stories are addictive...Please Update Soon...Heather
person Diz
schedule February 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I like it! Very good start. I hope you update soon.
person skye
schedule February 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
this story is starting off really well. i hope to read more! :]
person Mouse
schedule January 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is looking very promising! I really like your writing style!
person jeannie
schedule January 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
great start. i cant wait to read more
person Penny
schedule January 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
As always,this is starting out fantastic.I love Forgot Me Not and I also loved Time Retreating.You have an amazing way of telling a darker side to Anakin and Padme and their love. I feel that so much of that wasn't far from the truth in the stories. I believe that they were doomed from the get go! Anyway, I absolutely love this beginning and look forward to more.

Penny
person Finn
schedule January 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I am a fan of your work, update soon!
person rachel657062
schedule January 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yay! Anakin thinks of Padme and Padme thinks of Anakin. I can't wait for the story to get rolling. Chapter 2! chapter 2!
person Marie
schedule January 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I really enjoyed this and can't wait to see where you go with it.
person dancingnaked
schedule January 27, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh, I love this already. I can't wait to see what you do with this story. I read a decent amount of PWPs so a story with a plot is very refreshing. Hope you update soon. :)