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March 20, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This was good stuff. Well written, thoughtful, in character. Do you plan on adding more chapters?
Nic.
Nic.
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August 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Whoa, I really like this one! :D You've got a good background for Jack and didn't cut the dark part from Riddick's character at all. Nice job, please keep it going!
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August 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Beautiful start. Really nailed the characters.
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February 5, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Loved your beginning.
I love Riddick and Jack stories so much especially when written just after escaping the planet.
I like how you have Jack and Riddick trying to figure each other out it's so
bittersweet and romantic in an odd sort of way!!
Please update soon.
Cheers, blue.
I love Riddick and Jack stories so much especially when written just after escaping the planet.
I like how you have Jack and Riddick trying to figure each other out it's so
bittersweet and romantic in an odd sort of way!!
Please update soon.
Cheers, blue.
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February 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
oh, pleasepleaseplease tell me you're going to keep going with this?
I love seeing a writer deal with his ambiguities, rather than just make him a nutcase killer...
looking forward to more
xxxevilgrinxxx
I love seeing a writer deal with his ambiguities, rather than just make him a nutcase killer...
looking forward to more
xxxevilgrinxxx
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January 31, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Gripping. Excellent. Perfectly in character. I am on the edge of my seat for the next chapter.
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January 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh I like this first chapter.
more please soon
(don't forget to put a disclaimer in the first chapter)
more please soon
(don't forget to put a disclaimer in the first chapter)
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January 28, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wow...I really liked this....i hope you post more of it real soon!