rate_review Reviews

Great story! Any plans on continuing?

I realize that the odds of this ever being finished are low. But you should finish this. Today. Now.

The Gods of Geekdom demand moar...MOAR!!

All silliness aside great bit of writing. I just love stories where the plot turns a hated enemy into a passionate lover.
That and well, I'd bang Mara if given even half a chance so you know, that's an automatic ten points for ya there :P

Oh, wow. That is a spectacular story. It's a stunning storyline, with really lovely, juicy sex scenes. I love the way you've described his gradual giving in, how hard she worked for it, and how rewarding it turned out to be.

Love the sex, good to jerk off to. But the plot of an Alliance is excellent. Nice job.

I have been reading this for a bit now and am wondering if you plan to finish it up. I found the storyline most intimate and also intertwining. The whole theory that Darth Vader set in motion a course of Universal history that Jade and Luke were able to carry out and follow through with and somehow tame not only a Sith and Jedi, but a universe. Well I like that. It’s not something that most star wars fans have purposed, probably because of the explicit nature that this story involves, non the less it holds a perfect balance of storyline, sex, and character growth in it that it would be a shame for such a work to go unfinished. Please consider finding time to write and finish up this tale. Thank you so much for sharing it and I hope to read it’s conclusion sometime soon.

well, i was surprized see when i found htis story here i had found it like over year ago it it was never past luke bad time with the actors and mara saving him, so i read the rest
true smut smut, but last the was a plot,


i hope you will finish it, kinda wish vader haden been killed, i kinda like the bigg fella

Glad to see you updated, it's been a long wait. I loved Leia's reaction, and I'm curious to see how she'll react once she finds out that Mara's expecing Luke's child. Please update soon! :)

Uh oh. I sense a bit of trouble brewing for Mara and Luke here. What is Mara up to? And how is Luke gonna start seeing their past times together? Interesting chapter.

I really need an update to this fic. Come on, you had C4 to recharge your muse! You know what a Charlie Foxtrot my life has been this year... I need an update!! Especially knowing what is going on this month in my life. I need a HAPPY ENDING!!!