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I've missed this story. Glad to see that you've updated it. I'm looking forward to see what Luke and Mara are up to. Especially Mara.

Awesome story. I am really looking forward to reading the next chapter!

great story, cant wait to see how it ends!

Wonderful chapter!!! I am glad that Palpy got what he deserved! I like that disposal droid. But when Mara said, "Palpatine made a lot of messes in the throne room" I thought, "He should wear Depends undergarments for that sort of problem." LOL

I thought the talk between Luke and Mara was very touching. Mara is showing that she truly wants Luke and was not just using him. She has it bad for the Farmboy. That Sith is WHIPPED!!! So now we have to wonder if and when Luke will return to the new Emperess. We know he will come back for the child, but what will his relationship be like with Mara... or with Pet for that matter?

I made a little drawing in honor of this chapter. It is not that great since I am still learning how to draw: http://img141.imageshack.us/img141/2626/lukemarapalpatinefanficxg6.jpg

I really look forward to seeing how this story plays out. Keep up the good work!!

I was reluctant to read this story at first, since I am kinda skeptical about AU stories, but it's brilliant! I love the way you've written Luke, the Emperor was great too, and your (slightly) alternate Mara is great to read. I don't usually read multichapter stories either, so I just wanted you to know that I seriously dig this story.

Keep up the good writing.

Yay! Palpatine finally got what he deserved! Too bad the bastard was so evil that Mara couldn't let him live to suffer through life like he had let Vader go through. I'm glad that Mara and Luke are agreeing to get back together when things are peaceful again. I can't wait to see what happens next. I wonder how Leia is going to handle all of this.

Wow. Just wow. They're having a child... that was unexpected, but it's totally cool. Can't wait for more of this!

That was an absolutely brilliant chapter! The psychological warfare between Mara and Palpatine is amazing. Palpatine really shows his colors here---He is an manipulative liar, but he puts just enough truth into the story to leave Luke guessing.

I cannot wait to see Luke or Mara finish off ol' yellow eyes. Maybe that will inspire me to make a cool action drawing---Luke and Mara striking down the Emperor.

Great job!!!

I really hate those three little words at the end there. It's a good chapter, though.
Oh, I really do hope that Jade isn't lying to Luke. Sidious is one manipulative person so I'm going with the idea that he's trying to gain the upper hand here.
So Mara was going to have a child by Vader. That would have been interesting. Too bad she lost it and Vader. Seemed like it really struck a cord with her when Sidious tryed to put Vader's death on her hands.
I can't wait to see what happens next.

Wow, that was an incredibly hot chapter. Luke is never going to want to return to the rebellion. When he goes back to broker a deal with the rebels, I know Leia is going to want to keep him around and tell him not to go back to the evil clutches of the Empire. LOL What is Luke going to tell her then? He will probably tell Leia that he has to return for the good of the galaxy. It is a dirty job, but somebody has to do it. LOL

Can you imagine Han and Chewie sneaking aboard Mara's ship to save Luke and found him in that situation with Pet and Mara?! LOL. Some how I think Han would be cool with it. He probably would tell Leia he found Luke in aggressive committee negotiations.

Anyway, I really like that Pet got some good Farmboy lovin'. I hope she stays safe.

I look forward to seeing their confrontation with Palpatine.