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More please, this story is great, wonder how far you will go with it

pretty fucking sweet story

Totally love this story but I would like to seem more with Pet (like her real name) More Pet and Luke!!!

wow. that's intense. and very hot! love the story, hope you update!
~K~

Wonderful update!!! I got back from my vacation yesterday and I find this fantastic update!!! WOOT!!

The conversation between Luke and Mara was perfect. I know you were worried about the details on that scene, I think the changes you made were perfect!! You had Luke wondering about the role Mara plays in the Empire and if this Sith Emperess is truly evil. That reminds me of some of the questions that Jacen Solo is facing in the book Betrayal.

And, of course, the sex was truly hot!!! Wonderful!! Luke has her call him My Lord!!! Priceless!!

You did a fantastic job with this chapter!!

DMS

I really like your take on a not quite evil Mara. I think you're doing a very good job, Keep it up!
--Weasel--

good stuff. keep up the good writing please :)

Oh boy, that was hot. I love this fic. Now all they have to do is kill the Emperor and they can live happily ever after as a threesome. LOL

Great job!!

DMS

Wow! Did Mara fucked with the cuttest Darth Vader, now she wants to get his son? OH MY GOD! I would like toknow how was when she had her first time with Luke's father.

TBC??!!!??? NNNNOOOOOOOOO!!! Please don't leave us (and Luke) hanging like this!