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for The Taming of the Jedi

by DMSandArica

person platypusred
schedule February 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You just like torture don't you?

Leaving us all thinking about a very horny and shackled Luke...
sigh...
person Rian
schedule February 4, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Spit, Luke! Spit! Hmm...Then again, don't. I love these little concoctions you come up with. By the way, what I meant about 'fantasy sex fic's' is when they're roleplaying one of their fantasies (usually after they're married). Anyway, another hot chapter.
person DMS
schedule February 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh boy, now you are just being evil to my handsome Farmboy! Could Mara be a bigger cocktease? First he has to endure a sponge bath given to him by some young sexy thing, then he has to watch this young girl pleasure the Dark Lady. How much can one man endure!?! But then you have to throw in that itching lotion. Where in the world did you come up with that idea?!?! I would never think of a itching lotion that can only be removed by saliva or the 'wetness' of a certain Dark Lady. Poor, poor Luke. If I weren't married I would help him scratch that nasty itch. lol

Don't be too mean to my sexy Jedi. Please don't harm him permanently!

I suspect he will soon develop a form of Stockholm syndrome (I think that is the correct term to describe when a captive starts to identify with his captors). Maybe then he will become a more active participant in these games.

Great update. I look forward to reading more!!
person JayCee
schedule February 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh, that's evil... so evil...

I love it!
person JayCee
schedule February 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh yeah...

When I heard you were writing a dark!Mara bondage-isqe fic, I SO had to read.

You don't disappoint.

Now update!
person Anon
schedule February 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
One Night series is better. Why do fangirls always want to tie Luke up, anyway? He's not that cute.
person AgiVega
schedule February 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Mmmm... delicious torture :) I just find it funny that Vader could shag anyone... you know, after having seen Revenge of the Sith, I had the feeling that his mandhood had sort of... burned off ;)
person Rian
schedule February 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Argh! glitch ate my review...
Anyway, this was really good, especially considering you didn't have it beta'd. Dark Mara is usually only seen in LM fantasy sex fics. I'm interested in seeing where this is going, other than the obvious of course. ; ) However, even if it ends up being plotless, your stuff is always enjoyable to read. And I'm sure that Luke is capable of outperfoming his ole dad, seeing as he can breathe and all.
person platypusred
schedule February 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
AHH!!! MAra/Luke action.

I love it so far.

I've missed Mara/Luke fics... it's been too long...
person DMS
schedule February 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh my, Arica! Poor Luke, he has gotten himself in a situation that I am sure he was not prepared for!! LOL. Wonderful start. Usually we see Dark Luke, it is not often that we get to see a Dark Mara. Luke better get ready for a wild ride!! I did some more work on that pic. Just little detail work. Here is the new link: http://img468.imageshack.us/img468/2845/copyoftamingofthejedi6zj.jpg

I don't know if that will show up. Often links or email addresses are deleted from reviews. No matter, you probably wouldn't notice the differences between the two.

Great job on this fic. I love all of your stories. I like that line where it said, "This wasn't about sex." It reminded me of your "One Night.." series where the key phrase is "This in only sex."

I look forward to see what The Dark Lady Mara has in store for Luke. I am curious to see if Luke will surpass his father's... 'abilities'. LOL

Fabulous!!!

DMS