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for Hearts of Palm.

by GunshotGlitter

schedule May 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
I really love this story, especially Mercy's character! Please update!
person Gin
schedule October 24, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I love your story. You did a great job with your development of Mercy. I was a little surprised that she was so passive in Chpt. Two since she came on so hard when she first met Warren, but I guess being stranded has that effect on a person. I hope there's more.
person Pyra
schedule October 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Wait what just happend?Why did Warrens pants fall down? Er....Im thick...
person Pyra
schedule October 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oooooooo!!!! ^.^ *Giggles* Things are starting to heat up...er no pun intended....
person Raevyn
schedule August 6, 2006 at 12:00 AM
im really loving this fic, i need more of it please xx
person Kirsche
schedule February 19, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You wrote : "Warren's pants- that had somehow miraculously come unbottoned and unzipped- fell down."
Miracles tend to be good things and I don't think that this particular case follows such.
Try "mysteriously", it would be correct for this instance.