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for Sleeping beauty

by darkangel985

person Sadsally
schedule September 16, 2006 at 12:00 AM
NICE. Very nice. HOT so hot im gonna spell it with two t's HOTT
person Nico
schedule September 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh. Wow. I'm really not a big fan of long stories, but this one just drew me in after the first chapter.
I really like your descriptive way of writing, the ideas you've come up with, and each Chas that shows up and elicits those emotions from John. Great story, so far!
person zeegermans
schedule August 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
please update this is really good. plus fluffy romancy stuff yet to come. please update.
person zeegermans
schedule August 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
hooray! and i thought their wouldn't be a worse chas than the john-lookalike. I was wrong. yay, please keep updateing. ^_^
person Sadsally
schedule August 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Another great chapter, god i love how you describe each different Chas, but i think i already said that. and don't worry about the time it takes for updating. it takes me 2-3 weeks to update a chapter as well. but when the writers block lifts, watch out. i have completed chapters, sometimes writing 70 to 80 pages at one sitting, staying up till like 6 in the morning. Hehehehhe, i dont recommend that if you have ajob. but i love this story. so i will wait patiently and check back every three minutes for an up date.
person zeegermans
schedule August 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
please update, i need to know whats going on.
person zeegermans
schedule August 2, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Aaaaaaahhhhhhhhh! no nasty chas. and john hit him oooooooooh! nasty bleeping bleep. please update soon ive had to so long for this, please update soon.
person sadsally
schedule July 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
The diffrnt versions of chas, just get better and better, I loved Anger, and ow john reacted to him. thank you for the update.
person zeegermans
schedule July 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Please update!! i'm goin crazy wondering about this fic. Pleaseeeeeee!!!!!!
person Serenity J.
schedule July 23, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Stop playing around so much the waiting is totally killing me!