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July 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Glad you finally updated again. Although, I haven't checked on this in a while so...
Anyway, good job! ^^ Can't wait for the next installment~
Anyway, good job! ^^ Can't wait for the next installment~
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July 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
As always wonderful. Also for your information you aren't using too much German, and I know I'm personally not upset about learning more about Ichabod's (Georg's) history. It fills us in on the past and what happened between Friedrick and Georg. Can't wait for the next chapter, keep up the good work.
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July 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Sorry 'bout not reviewing chapter 4, I didn't know you updated! Oh well...I am looking forward to more soon!
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July 14, 2006 at 12:00 AM
BOUT TIME YOU UPDATED!! IM SO HAPPY
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July 13, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Ooo, so good. Liked their meeting; the Hessian coming up behin him, and how he sighed in exasperation when Ichabod feinted again. What was this about patience when pursuing George? I'd like to know about that, but not right now, unless you can work it into a chapter where there is also some interaction with the Hessian and Ichabod. Don't pile up to much of the past at once (you haven't done that, just an advice). Also.. more Daredevil!! ;)
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July 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
great just like the others. I can't wait for the next chapter to see what happens. I think it will be just as good, if not better!
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June 30, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Yay! New chapter! I really do enjoy when you write about Georg as well as Ichabod, it gives a good balance to the story. Instead of what most authors do and write a history chapter as an 'Oh, by the way,' sort of thing. Keep writing, this has more than enough drive and potential to go somewhere.
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June 29, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Next please. :)
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June 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
LOVE THE STORY!! CONTINUE!!
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June 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This is great. For a long time now I've been rather disappointed in the quality of the Sleepy Hollow stories but now that you've taken it to yourself to write one, I'm very excited. So far this story seems absolutely brilliant. Once again you've taken a brand new setting and are working it woderfully. The sheer thoroughness and thoughtfulness is obvious from the text, and any reader looking for a deeper read is certain to be more than satisfied by epic style and scale of this piece.
On another note, though, I feel that there is something I should comment on, although it might not be all that nice; in this story as well as others, I've noticed that you seem to have a bit of a blind spot when it comes to the twin words 'was' and 'were'. This is a very minor detail on anyone who has managed to master another language so well, but what can I say, I have a thing about spelling.
But so far this story is absolutely fantastic. I've never seen the Horseman as such a fully developed character before and I must say you're doing an amazing work of him. The way we learn more and more about him, through the historical events as well as through Ichabod's dreams is captivating characterization at its best. This story is a real masterpiece in the making and I, for one, can't wait to see more of it.
On another note, though, I feel that there is something I should comment on, although it might not be all that nice; in this story as well as others, I've noticed that you seem to have a bit of a blind spot when it comes to the twin words 'was' and 'were'. This is a very minor detail on anyone who has managed to master another language so well, but what can I say, I have a thing about spelling.
But so far this story is absolutely fantastic. I've never seen the Horseman as such a fully developed character before and I must say you're doing an amazing work of him. The way we learn more and more about him, through the historical events as well as through Ichabod's dreams is captivating characterization at its best. This story is a real masterpiece in the making and I, for one, can't wait to see more of it.