rate_review Reviews

This is a wonderful fic, very well written. I love the way that you portrayed the characters. It was great, the chemistry between Lex and Scar, not to mention the communication without words. Great fic.

This fic left me very much breathless XD

I so loved it, finally reading what I hoped would truly happen between Scar and Lex. Their relationship is so complex and yet so wickedly intense that you will just die from reading.

As a die-hard fan of your fiction, I hope that some day we will see a sequal similiar to this perfect story.
You're a brilliant and talented writer.
Kudos.

This was amazing, just as I expected it to be. Rarely have I ever found tastefully written fics like yours. I loved it, and I hope someday you'll write another. I'm fascinated by their relationship.

Wow...That was truly the most exquisite sexual encounter with the Predator I've red so far. But then again I'm sure you've heard that one many times before...Hope you decide to do another one some day.Your sure to have some fans here!!

yay! VERY, very nice piece! Lovely prose, and a sweet reunion.

Nic.

Wow....that....that is amazing. I've been reading your work on ffnet, and have been loving it, but this is astounding. The sex is very hot, and believable. You made Scar work without humanising him, which is a serious acomplishment.

I really really like this. A whole lot.

*goes back to re-read*

Wow...a very impressive story for the continuation of Lex and Scar's journey. Lex's perspective is so well-written, and one feels sorrow for her current state. And then, there is her reunion with Scar, which makes me very happy. ^_^ Thank you for allowing me (and others) the honor of reading your story. I enjoyed it greatly.

Nicely done. Better than I expected!!!
Congratulations for such a nice finale

Ai'Apaec

once in a while i have to come back and read this. this entire series is one of my favorites... the bond of wartime battles is almost unbreakable, and you illustrated it perfectly.
that, and the smut was good. :D

I read your other fics that came before this. I absolutly love LOVE this snippet ending in the series as well. I like how they got each other so subtly, a gradual progression to affection. I can not wait to find out what happens next in Subtle Threat cause Reed Weyland is an creep, but a great villan for a fic. Scar and Lex's gradual advance to relationship beyond clanmates is realistic oddly enough. I love how you use body language to convey so much and move the story along through Lex's perspective of things. Your fans understand this is a gift fic of sorts cause you seem to doubt they could maintain a romantic type of relationship beyond the hunting trials they face in isolation together. I'm glad you can now. Will Subtle threat make it here to this site or stay where it is?