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by drworm

schedule November 29, 2012 at 12:00 AM
"Why do so many things start out white but end up red?"

By far my favorite line! :D

So haunting and intriguing and I just love the white and red thing going on! This is so Willard and I just lovelovelove how this was written. Absolutely beautiful! And the last paragraph... If only Willard knew! T_T I always feel bad for him!

P.S. I live your username! They Might Be Giants are awesome! ^_^
schedule September 2, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I'm pretty sure that's I'm about a centimeter from crying. That was very good, poor, sweet Willard.
schedule July 23, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Fan-fucking-tastic. Write more.
schedule January 11, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Whee! A Willard yaoi story!! You're a very skilled writer. I read your stories on fanfiction.net as well. You should put your "Not You" (jelous Ben)on this site too, I loved it. Could you write a sequal to that? Thank you so much for being a fellow fan of Willard and his ratty friends. I used to tease that I should be Willamina(i used to own rats)!! Keep writing please!!
person Melody
schedule December 27, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wow, this story is creepy. I liked it though, but I really can see why it disturbed you to write it.
person Tourniquet
schedule August 25, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very well-written. I'll never be able to watch Willard or Full-Metal Jacket the same way again. <3
person Dillon
schedule November 28, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Wow, man. Simply wow. Astounding, deep, beautiful, and sad. So, so sad. I could really imagine it, too, those things happening to Willard, and his beloved pet, and the way he must have felt, after, whecratcrates turned red. Amazing work.

Dil
person Nuriko Windchaser
schedule November 5, 2003 at 12:00 AM
These are just fantastic snippets, you captured the character of ard ard perfectly.
person steph
schedule May 31, 2003 at 12:00 AM
that was amazing...i love that movie.