rate_review Reviews

I kid you not when I say yours is be BEST fan fiction I have read, and it sparked my interest in reading SW FF.
The problem is that there is NO other ff that compares to your writing. All the other ff pales in comparison.
Everything is perfect: the plot, the movement, and the human element. I hope you continue writing.

I just read about the censorship at ff. net and, although this is late, it really saddens me.

MTFBWY

I liked your story.

I will only quirl with you over one detail: Foreshadowing. Did Padme have to be SO miserable thoroughout...even the sex she is hating and loving? A woman is entitled to some moments of peace of mind even in the make believe world...right?

Vader is vicious and evil but he had to have a little of that little boy in him somewhere when he pursued his love.

Dark, beautiful and with a certain tone of dread. This is how their relationship should have been in the films... Maybe not as dark, but the constant tension, and the undercurrent of what Anakin's fate is... Okay, i am probably phrasing everything all wrong, just know that I think this is wonderful.

I also just realized I never reviewed the first story of this series. ::smacks forehead:: I can't believe how horrible a reader I am. But, yes, I just want to say to you again that I absolutely LOVE your work!! I remember first reading Succumb two years ago, reading up to Chapter 4 or 5, and never having the time to finish reading it. Then, last month, after seeing Episode 3, my obsession with Star Wars fiction was revived, and I stumbled upon this same story again. Boy, was I EVER so happy I finished it, and read the sequel AND prequels within a week. Once again, I say that you are a brilliant writer! Not only do you capture the dark depths of love, lust, and obsession...But you also just write fantabulous sex. :) I look forward to more of your work!!!

This was the best Star Wars fan fic I have read EVER. You're grasp of the dialogue is perfect and I loved, loved, loved it!!!

Woah. That was really good! The Epilouge was a tad bit off, in some areas now that we know what happens in RotS. But all in all, it was perfect. Great job!

Shit.

That was fucking sweet!
Keep writing.

I like the thought of Anikan sending her dirty thoughts with his powers! hehe, I love this fic, and I like your Ani.

This is a fascinating story that explains Padme's transformation from a strong former queen to a helpless wife. I remember my dad complaining about how weak Padme's character was in Ep III: being even unable to decide what to do about her pregnancy, the deterioration of the Senate, etc; and this really casts some light on how Anakin was able to manipulate her into becoming his. It's a very powerful story. I would have liked to have seen more of her views on the events in Ep III, but I suppose her transformation into Anakin's wife was the main focus of the story. I can't wait for the sequal!

this is a great fic. it really follows the storyline well and the fact that you used quotations from the movie really help to make it seem real. i cant wait to read the sequel.