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by Pagan

person Carole
schedule May 29, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Wonderful.
person Luna
schedule May 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
this is a really, really awesome fic... woah. As a general rule, I don't like Padme, but the tittle of this story enticed me... and I found only awesome writing, interesting plot, and fairly accurately portraid characters... :)

Overall, I really only have one word to describe this fic: Orgasmic :)
person know-it-all
schedule May 17, 2005 at 12:00 AM
This fic is so awesome! I have no idea why you don't have a million reviews, but you'll get there. Keep up the good work.
person Katie Sparks
schedule April 26, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Very well done, I am impressed,very..erm aggressive, some syntax errors though, but i think those were done by computer because they all looked the same, btu a wonderful story none the less!
person Anon
schedule April 18, 2005 at 12:00 AM
you are an incredibly talented writer, you capture the emotions with immense precision... congratulations on an excellent story
person Elise
schedule April 7, 2005 at 12:00 AM
AWESOME!!! What more can I say?! What an incredible addition to Episode 2 and transition to Episode 3! Keep up the good work!
person inkphenda
schedule March 11, 2005 at 12:00 AM
Oh, very well done! The detail, scene, and interaction you painted was just stunning, mixing the movie and the original material to perfection. Great job!
person amniarix
schedule September 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Wow, intellectually I always knew Anakin had to get from the sweet slave boy to the heartless creature of darkness he became, and the obsee joe journey this would entail is exquisitely detailed in your fic.x wix with properly and clearly defined motivations and thought processes will always do it for me and this is a prime example of it. Can't give you enough praise for the seamless combining of smut fic and raw emotion to create this mini masterpiece. Love your work, thank you for sharing this amazing vision.
person amniarix
schedule September 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
Yes, yes, yes, yes, yes, that explains WHY Padme covered the security camera in her room, In the movie I just accept it when Anakin tells Obi-Wan it is covered but this is too good, it ties in with the movie so well. Love this story already and I've only reached chapter 2.
person amniarix
schedule September 5, 2004 at 12:00 AM
you wrote this fic for me didn't you, because it is so bloody good and exactly what I have always wished someone with talent and imagination would write. Chapters three and four were splendid and do you think its too late to get George to do a reshoot and include some of your scenes?