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I bothered my friend to read these and was rewarded into getting him to not only read them but to love them as I do! I hope that you are doing ok and that life is treating you good. Have a good week and again, I love your stories and style. You are the best writer on here by far.

I absolutely LOVE what you write!! You have the characters down so good that you have given me such insight into their personalities I could never have even hoped to comprehend on my own with what little time I have nowadays. My friend Tasha was the one who sent me the link to your stories, I have to say they are by far the best AFF's I have read (even though I don't read many) and will remain so for a long time, I am sure. I love your stuff!! Keep it coming!! Give us aspiring writers some good examples to go by and fuel our burning passion with your beautiful words! xD

Hi! I am so sorry it has taken me so long to answer your email and review this story. Life decided to go silly for abit but for now it has settled down and I finally have the chance to let you know that I loved this story as much, if not more, then the first one. It really is amazing how well you write and I can not stress enough to you how much I think that you have done a damn good job. Like I said before I have never been a Star Wars fan...at all...but believe it or not your stories changed my mind on it, made me want to actually watch the movies and read some of the books. You are the best writer on this site and I think there are some reallyenteented writers here, but your work outshines them. Thank you again for emailing me and I hope that you are able to continue to write as much as you want....I am looking forward to seeing anything you post. Great job and thanks again for taking out the time to talk back.

Wow, the relentless descent of one man into darkness, with lots of smut thrown in. Whats not to like? This will be an interesting task for the third movie to show Anakins fall to becoming Vadar without getting too dark. (I mean it will have to retain its pg rating) still, however Geoge L. chooses to show it, in my heart I shall keep the explanation shown in your fic as being the 'real' version of events. Great work!

This one is even better than "Succumb." One of the most erotic stories I have ever read ... I couldn't get enough. I think KellyB giv given me a deeper understanding of Anakin's true character in this story than in most of the "official" stories. I lost myself in this one - a tough thing for a writer to do but KellyB has pulled it off. I was able to focus on what was happening in the story rather than thinking "Anakin wouldn't ..." or "Padme doesn't ..." or feeling that the situation was unlikely. The very best I have read in a LONG time - thank you so so much.

Do you ever write anything that sucks? This, like all the others you've written, surpasses anything I've ever read in Star Wars fan fiction! Such emotion, such passion, such depth! The way you paint with words! You are the Da Vinci of the written word! Hats off to you!!! You should win every fan fiction award out there!

HOT, HOT, HOT! DAMN, HOT. The writing is superb and the lemons are outrageously well written. I need a cold shower just from the chapters. Great story. ^_~

Just as incredible as when I read Succumb. Excellent writing. Anakin seem to be less of a jerk after I read this...it's so tragic that their story would have such a sad ending. Excellent!

Incredible! It seemed like ages ago that I read, "Succomb" and I thought that I was going to die waiting for the POV of Anikan. Been checking on a number of different sites and actually had given up hope. Yesturday I had stumbled across "The End Justifies the Means" and WOW! I've been reading it in incriments because my brain could take only so much. I guess I liked savoring your stories. It is extremely erotic but in very good taste.

Anikan's POV of the confused, intense, and troubled youth came out clearly in your story. Aside from all his boyish jealousies, possesivenss, and anguish, he was still fighting "the voice" that was slipping him into darkness. Of course, his love affair with Padme was delaying the inevitable. Your insightfulness is right on the money. Sometimes I did get confused as tore yre you were at in the story with each chapter because Succomb was much more faithful to the movie time line. Anyways, once I figured out where you were it was ok. Anikan's boyish conquest's over Padme were almost cute!

If I had to give you a grade it would be A+++++. Keep up the excellent work and keep writing. PLEASE!

God. You're brillant. I have never felt my heart pump faster by READING something ever before, even when I first read Succumb on Fanfiction.net. And this really soothed me too. After Succumb, which was magnifecient, I felt a little weary of Anakin, that maybe it was ONLY lust driving him to conquest over Padme. Damn, did you prove me wrong! And thank goodness you did. I'm... I'm... I'm speechless, that's what I am. Who knows how many times I will come back to both of your stories to read them over and over again. Ya know, I couldn't even spell correctly after I read this? I was writing some list and I kept messing up. Beautiful, passionate, dangerous...