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November 30, -0001 at 12:00 AM
This is without a doubt one of the best Phantom fictions I have read. Your characterizations are flawless, the the story fluid and entrancing. I would be most pleased if you would be willing to alert me when your next chapter is posted; if you would sim
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November 30, -0001 at 12:00 AM
What a terribly delicious fanfiction. You mix angst and romance right. Good thing the Phantom wasn't there too much. Little persistent fop! -strangles Raoul-
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November 30, -0001 at 12:00 AM
Omg. I am seriously addicted to this fanfic. Please, PLEASE update this soon, your writing is absolutely amazing! I savored ever word of this fanfiction. Please update soon!!!
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November 30, -0001 at 12:00 AM
I like the story and can't wait for the next chapter. The only criticism I have is I think Christine is still a bit childish acting. Other than that keep up the good work.
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November 30, -0001 at 12:00 AM
please update soon i cant wait to see what happens
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November 30, -0001 at 12:00 AM
oh, I like it! I can't wait to read more. I like how you write in a 3rd person omnipotent view. That's awesome. It's totally awesome, even without the beta, so you learned well from however your beta is. Good job!
Angel Marie
Angel Marie
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November 30, -0001 at 12:00 AM
A nice twist on the story!! Though, I'm sorry to admit, when I first read the line about there being a coffin...I laughed. Sorry, but the image struck me as rather funny...Of course, when you next wrote him as naked, all those laughing thoughts flew ou
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November 30, -0001 at 12:00 AM
Wow!
I love the viewpoint used in this story. The first chapter, despite not being beta'd, is VERY well written - in fact, better written than some stories that actually had betas, lol.
If you need someone to beta the story I may be able to help...mayb
I love the viewpoint used in this story. The first chapter, despite not being beta'd, is VERY well written - in fact, better written than some stories that actually had betas, lol.
If you need someone to beta the story I may be able to help...mayb
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November 30, -0001 at 12:00 AM
Bravo! I started reading when you posted this, but I hadn't reviewed. I have realized that it is too good not to review. :)
So...you are looking for a beta, ne? I am not like an English teacher, but I spell very well and I know a few things about gram
So...you are looking for a beta, ne? I am not like an English teacher, but I spell very well and I know a few things about gram
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November 30, -0001 at 12:00 AM
Awww! I'm glad Christine is not so mad at him anymore. I wish he were naked in the coffin for that would be a sight for Christine! Lol. Update soon please!