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for Tremulous and Tender

by NataliaV

person Chicoel
schedule November 30, -0001 at 12:00 AM
“This does explain much. I had feared it would come to this. Christine, I must tell you, I have cared for Erik since he was a child. The same as I have cared for you. Despite this, you must be made aware of his true character. He is no angel. He is dang
person Chicoel
schedule November 30, -0001 at 12:00 AM
Is it my PC or this site that eats half of my messages here?!

I also said above that I so wanna be Christine and make the right choice in the end.
Oh, man... I think I'm slowly dying here.

Going on --->
person Chicoel
schedule November 30, -0001 at 12:00 AM
I'm bawling here!
At the end of chapter 8.

I'm gonna kill you if this all end up them not having each others!! I swear I will!
They HAVE TO share with each others one love, one lifetime!!

Grrr.

"Yet in his eyes
all the sadness of the world.
person Chicoel
schedule November 30, -0001 at 12:00 AM
o.O
I... I- ....!!!!
I'm so lost here at the end of the chap 9.
Ok, I _never_ really dare to actualy think of jealous/angry Erik, but for a brief second.
It's bot exciting and extremely frihtning.
Mr. Butler shows only a hint of it in the movie and
person Chicoel
schedule November 30, -0001 at 12:00 AM
Last time I din't actualy know what bowling means. Now I do.
Gonna cry for the rest of the night.

Actualy I am laughin and cryin both at the same time.
"The Music of the Night" _happened_ to play on my playinglist as I red he 10th chapter.
And re
person Chicoel
schedule November 30, -0001 at 12:00 AM
"bowling"?? I meant bawlin, of course.
Excuse me for the time here 3.30 AN, I'm deeply moved byt the latest chapter and I'm beging you to continue A.S.A.P!
person Chicoel
schedule November 30, -0001 at 12:00 AM
"Raoul only, and _only_, wants to guard him and guide him. And that's not right."

.... Oh my GOD. It's good that I read what I write in the middle of the night before I post it, ain't it? :S
Her.... Christine, I meant... You knew it so I'll _jus
person Chicoel
schedule November 30, -0001 at 12:00 AM
Let's see if I could write now that I'm really awake and unmoved by too-beautiful stories...

I just wanted to add to my messy rewievs that you have managed really well to include the songs into your version.
It was too cute he sang the "Music of th
person Chicoel AGAIN!
schedule November 30, -0001 at 12:00 AM
Ok. Now you're really scaring me with your Review Responses. You know.
Which I finally actualy red.
Raoul won't ie? Ok. Let the fop live.
But who the hell is maybe dying (in the end?)?

Please do NOT do what I fear.
^
Make it more personal, more
person Anawye
schedule November 30, -0001 at 12:00 AM
Oh, this is so great! And Erik is so sweet and lovely! Please, write more...