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for Bullfrog, Chickenhawk, Turtledove

by xstarkillerx

schedule April 17, 2010 at 12:00 AM
I think this was great. I don't really think there actually is anything like this between them, but it was entertaining and sweet :). Well done! Write some more :P
schedule July 12, 2009 at 12:00 AM
I was just watching this movie and thinking someone needed to write a story to this effect, and bam... here you are. I really like the dialogue; both Sid and Diego are really in character. Props to you!! Thanks for sharing. =]
schedule July 9, 2008 at 12:00 AM
I almost didn't click on this, but I'm very glad I did. Oh my God, so adorable. xD They're both so amazingly in-character, and it's just such a realistic banter for the two of them, clever and quick-moving, and really fun to read. AND it's my favorite pairing from the movie, so extra points there. ^^ Delightfully done.
schedule May 22, 2008 at 12:00 AM
This is really cute. ~<3
Your a great writer and your keen eye for things gives this story the jagged softness that was required to capture Diego and Sid's characters. One thing to watch out for is speech. Sid, though he's a bit odd, hasn't in the past and wouldn't use the word "Ain't" he would use "Isn't" like I've heard him use it in the past.
Great job though and keep it up!
schedule November 1, 2007 at 12:00 AM
lol plzz say your are going to write more because that was great!!!
person Aisuru
schedule October 2, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Neat! I would love to read what happens next!
schedule September 10, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Too cute!
person lexen
schedule December 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
GREAT fic hope to see another one with Diego and Sid soon
person Anon
schedule August 20, 2006 at 12:00 AM
aw, that was cute. I never figured there'd be a story about these two but there is!
person Octoberbride
schedule June 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hey, no criticism or flaming here. It was beautifully and eloquently written, something that is hard to come by in a lot of erotic writing. Plus, it was believable. Makes me want to rewatch the scene you are referring to. Being a huge Ice Age 1 and 2 fan, I think you executed this piece of prose wonderfully. Great job!