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for Jedi Knights

by Stark

person Brognus
schedule April 28, 2007 at 12:00 AM
Good Story
schedule June 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I'm down with most Star Wars pairings. The idea was cool, but (and I say this with no ill intent) you need to work on your editing a bit. Maybe a beta could help? I also found the dialouge kind of off. But like I said, cool pairing. Keep writing.
person X
schedule June 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
It was good but the pairing freaked me out. Sorry. Lol!
person Doreen
schedule June 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Dude, you should definately update this.