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May 10, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Great story, I really enjoyed it. It was way too short though, and very rushed. It could be incredible if you were to go back and rewrite it. Make it longer, draw it out, give the reader a real chance to know your dragon, she's a pretty amazing girl after all.
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April 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I LOVE this story mmmm Riddick, your've done an excellent job really like Draca cant wait to read more of this story pretty please keep updating!!