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November 1, 2011 at 12:00 AM
Awesome!!! I knew I read one of your stories before, and this one confirmed it! I've read the third one of the series...
Have you ever considered writing for a publisher?
Love it! Want to read more!
Have you ever considered writing for a publisher?
Love it! Want to read more!
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January 30, 2007 at 12:00 AM
This story can't be finished, there is still the happ birth and fixing Ralph's heart.
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January 17, 2007 at 12:00 AM
reread this story and I still love it. please update son.
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November 26, 2006 at 12:00 AM
First off let me say how much I love this story. Part one and two were great and nicely written... then I got to chapter 13 (sigh)
El is a hypocrite...
She left earth to avoid life and consequences if I'm correct (police chasing her) So how can she look down at the two females?
I don't mean to sound cynical because once again the characters are great, but it just seams out of character for her to suddenly try to judge someone. Like her status suddenly went to her head. Just my thoughts as a reader, please dont take it personally. I hope later she will apologize for acting the way she did.
Stew
El is a hypocrite...
She left earth to avoid life and consequences if I'm correct (police chasing her) So how can she look down at the two females?
I don't mean to sound cynical because once again the characters are great, but it just seams out of character for her to suddenly try to judge someone. Like her status suddenly went to her head. Just my thoughts as a reader, please dont take it personally. I hope later she will apologize for acting the way she did.
Stew
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October 22, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You must continue, please! I (and I'm sure others) are EAGERLY awaiting the next chapter! The first book was amazing, so I have no doubt that this one will continue to be amazing, too. Seeing El interacting more with M'Pa and Ver'On going to get Ralph and Ro provides a nice balance of events.
Also, it would seem that there's more females to be brought on this trip instead of the original two for Tan and Kal (though I'm more curious about what Kal's been up to). Please continue as soon as you're able. ^_^
Also, it would seem that there's more females to be brought on this trip instead of the original two for Tan and Kal (though I'm more curious about what Kal's been up to). Please continue as soon as you're able. ^_^
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October 21, 2006 at 12:00 AM
More more.. :)
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October 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
please tell me there is more to this story
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October 12, 2006 at 12:00 AM
NOTE FROM THE AUTHOR
pacients everyone, the first chapter of the third installment is still in hand writing right now. i'm typing it in whenever i can at the office. you'll have all the answers to all your questions in that story.
also, maybe at the end, a sneek peak at a possible 4th story You never know with me :D
hang in there, i'm almost done.
jem
pacients everyone, the first chapter of the third installment is still in hand writing right now. i'm typing it in whenever i can at the office. you'll have all the answers to all your questions in that story.
also, maybe at the end, a sneek peak at a possible 4th story You never know with me :D
hang in there, i'm almost done.
jem
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October 11, 2006 at 12:00 AM
I've really been enjoying the stories. The characters and plots have always been so intriguing to me. Sometimes your spelling isn't quite right, but you've improved so much with the second book compared with the first one. I can't wait to read the whole story to see where you take the characters.
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October 8, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oh no your not finished. You have to many questions to answer.
What will happen with Chonie and Tan'ock?
What is happening with Kal and this ritual?
What is going to happen to the two other humans they picked up?
Where are the babies? WE WANT BABIES! WE WANT BABIES!
What will happen with Chonie and Tan'ock?
What is happening with Kal and this ritual?
What is going to happen to the two other humans they picked up?
Where are the babies? WE WANT BABIES! WE WANT BABIES!