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May 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
So, you've finally given up teasing El and are just teasing us. This is a very well written chapter (41) with lovely descriptions. I really don't want this story to end.
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May 25, 2006 at 12:00 AM
DAMN IT!!! How can you TEASE us like that? What are you doing? Trying to kill us? But, anywayz, I loved it! At least now I know they will finally get it on in the next chappy. After all this time, I think they deserve it! Can't wait...keep up the great work!
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May 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You are an excellent writer. It certainly isn't easy to describe a predator but your story is nicely descriptive where it needs to be. Really enjoyed it. Eagerly awaiting the next chapter....
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May 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
You are a very cruel writer. Tormenting and teasing El like that. Ver'On deserves the embarrasment of falling out of himself for what he and M'Pa have done to her. hehe.
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May 18, 2006 at 12:00 AM
*Slumps down in seat* That is evil. I believe I'm getting as frustrated as El. The gathering can't get here fast enough!! I am really loving this story! I'm sitting on the edge of my seat waiting to read what will happen next. *gets on her knees* Please update soon!!!!!!!
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May 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
OH! YOU ARE CRUEL!
goddamn it...
all worked up and now I gotta wait for a bloody UPDATE!!!
if they get interupted i'll scream, i swear.
goddamn it...
all worked up and now I gotta wait for a bloody UPDATE!!!
if they get interupted i'll scream, i swear.
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May 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Greetings,
I just thought I should stop and tell you how much I am liking this story & to say keep up the good work!
Bright blessings
Tammatha
I just thought I should stop and tell you how much I am liking this story & to say keep up the good work!
Bright blessings
Tammatha
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May 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
wow loving this story please don't stop.
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May 17, 2006 at 12:00 AM
grr. dammit.
okay, hurry up with the damned gathering, you know how evil you're being, right?
Sadness? a bedroom? what? damn.
okay, hurry up with the damned gathering, you know how evil you're being, right?
Sadness? a bedroom? what? damn.
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May 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
YAY! I am so glad that everyone is OK. With all the twists, I was sure something bad was going to happen! I love this story. I can't to see what happens next. Waiting patiently...