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May 15, 2006 at 12:00 AM
This story is EXCELLENT!! I can't stop reading it. El is such a brave woman. She really kicked those guys butts! I hope that she will be able to expose Ver'on's great grandfather for the bastered he is. Sol is a great character. We he got mad at El because he thought she lied I wanted to smack him, but it all worked out. I am sitting on the edge of my seat waiting to read what will happen next! Keep up the excellent work, and please keep those chapters coming!!!!!!
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May 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Oi! I can't log into my account! But at least I can leave reviews as a guest.
Anyway, I am so glad you picked up on this story despite the database problems aff is having. I really hope other Predator fic authors follow suit and just carry their updates over to the new archive.
This story is progressing very well, with some nice twists. I can't wait until you write 'the gathering' act. =)
-Sara
Anyway, I am so glad you picked up on this story despite the database problems aff is having. I really hope other Predator fic authors follow suit and just carry their updates over to the new archive.
This story is progressing very well, with some nice twists. I can't wait until you write 'the gathering' act. =)
-Sara
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May 9, 2006 at 12:00 AM
as you all have probably seen, the log in section is a little off kilter. i have chapter 38 complete and ready for upload, and hopefully another chapter will be ready by the time the site allows us to log in again. just wanted to keep you eager beavers updated. take care. =)
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May 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
More, More, MORE!!! I am not really sure how I made it through that chapter! I think my heart stopped at least a few times! You are such an awesome writer. I can't wait for more, more, more!
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May 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
no that's just wrong but having M'pa be alright would make up for it. Please don't hold on the smut...really needing it here.
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May 3, 2006 at 12:00 AM
crying out loud, I was so worried it was Lee'tha that fell on the spear. i could see her doing it to protect her friend. while I am bummed that M'Pa got hurt, it kinda served him right for not being straight with Ver'On and El. yeah, for him for not dying, he is one strong yautja.
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May 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
Hey prairiefire, and all my other readers, i am sorry for leaving you in the dark for so long. updates to my personal system hung things up a bit, then the site got moved, and now...well, i'm catching up on my hand written notes, and little by little the story is coming to you. i hope you enjoy reading it as much as i enjoy writing it. be well take care, and watch for more updates :D ** snickers ** cliffhanger in chapter 36...i will say no more.
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May 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
no....way did you have to end it so soon. please update quickly. loving this story.
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May 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
oh! OH! GOD YOUR EVIL!
you better damned well update fast cause you can't just stop in mid battle like that! GAH!
jeez!
oooooooooooooooooh... damn..
*sputters*
heh.
you better damned well update fast cause you can't just stop in mid battle like that! GAH!
jeez!
oooooooooooooooooh... damn..
*sputters*
heh.
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May 1, 2006 at 12:00 AM
NNNOOOO!!!! Cliffhangers!! I love to hate them. You have to update soon!! I demand it, It was great by the way!